Help make a movie script --> add a line

Pastfinder

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The rules: Add a line to the script. It can be as long as you want, but it needs to connect back with the opening scene. You can name your "character" whatever you want, or you can use someone else's character.



SCENE I: Bunch of guys are standing in line to get in a nightclub.

Guy #1: (Talking on cell phone) 'I told you hon, I am in line right now to get tickets to the Dave Matthews concert. Seriously, I would never go behind your back.'


This is not going to earn a "PEOPLE'S CHOICE AWARD", so let's let it die a nice quiet death.


This actually goes along the lines of a "2 words per post story thread". Sorry, but this is just a NEF thread in the making.

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b0mbrman

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Flash over to girl's house

Girl: Honey, whose voice is that? You're not at one of *those*kind of nightclubs again, are you?
 

docmanhattan

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Guy #1: "..No, hon. An SUV is not the same as a truck...No, you don't HAVE to drive in mud. It's okay for just the streets. Uh-huh. uh-huh. okay. yeah. alright. .."

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LordMaul

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Random guy walks up: *loudly to guy talking on phone* HEY, John wants to know when you're gonna get back to him, you silly goose!
 

sohcrates

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<< Girl: Honey, whose voice is that? You're not at one of *those*kind of nightclubs again, are you? >>



Guy #1: "Baby, i TOLD you that was in my past! "