[GTA4 Video] - I spent some time on this. Would appreciate feedback!

[Coldkilla]

Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TQZ2qZns994&feature=plcp
Trailer: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cxZ1DGhNFS8
Poster: http://i.imgur.com/HXO0y.jpg
Description: In these hard economic times, two people fight for a chance to work for a powerful mafia family. They end up caught in the middle of something bigger than the both of them.

Hope you enjoy! Thanks yall.

 

[Tweak155]

Not terrible, but I think you needed a lot more time to put into the story. The trailer was pretty good though, and overall the director aspects of it was really good, as well as the voice acting (maybe because it was minimal?)

 

[Coldkilla]

Very possible because it was minimal. Truthfully I've never worked with voice actors before, and the idea of adding them in came fairly late into the project. The stories on my previous project(s) have been almost non-existent & immature. I hope that the next few videos will transition into a more story focused narrative.

Example of a previous video of mine: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jx2uqbjzB90

So I'd say I've evolved but not nearly to the point I'd like to reach. Appreciate the feedback though!