Freestyle Session

KidViciou$

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while doing a poetry project for my 11th grade english class, i chose the Guru as my poet of choice. i broke down, and analyzed 5 of his poems, as well as wrote one of my own. i got one of the highest grades inthe class, if not THE highest. i also changed the opinion of my teacher. i will post my poem here, but this is STRICTLY FOR HIPHOP (or rap) HEADS ONLY!!! PLEASE RESPECT ME AND MY REQUEST IN NOT POSTING UNLESS YOU ARE INTERESTED!!!

feel free to post your own, i would like to start freestyling again.


Calibration

calibration
my styles mad amazin,
i rhyme, i got yoou all dazin,
once done, i hear u all praisin,
i the shepherd, when i lead my opposition,
to the field for the grazin,
then back to the tation,
straight to the slaughter house,
i got them setup, from the very start,
theys in a rouse,
they caught the cheese in they mouth,
cause thats all MCs do when they hear,
is just cheese, they dont know how to stay clear
they try to step to me,
ull know the face of fear,
cause i am a supervillan,
they call me the disciple,
ur rap game skills i will stifle
stunt the growth
cause their too many whack ones
on the excape boat
when on the prowl, and i creep,
if u in sight, prepare to catch my heat,
once its all said and done, ull be ko'ed,
lyin at my feet,
its apocalypse that your facin,
so go to church , say your grace an
remember to pray to killah priest,
for he the savior, and pasture for MCs
eats a peasants meal, of nothing but porridge and peas,
when people see him comin, they tremble in their knees
but thats just what we need,
a new disciple, to take out the trash
of so called rappers, and their style of rap
they claim that they pack,
they better think twice,
when you hear my name,
pull a pi, or else youll feel my pain

the psychology, behind my longevity,
is one deeply routesd in the laws of gravity.
to calculate the speed of my rhymes,
take V final, subtract V initial,
that wound u claim to have inflicted was superficial,
its too late for you,
you already spoke,
now its your throat that i proceed to choke,
not onece did you hear me claim to bust ghats,
nor once did you hear me say that i murdered catz.
all i said from the very start,
was dont mess with me,
cause i got too much damn heart.
my skin is 12 inches thick,
and hard as a brick.
taht promotes me to take a lick,
and still be able to tick.
ill size u up like u had rickets
then the only music u will make,
will sound like that of crickets.
u got my heart pacin,
do you know what your facin,
cause what i just did,
was get my skills calibratin.
and at the samme time,
got my sould hatin,
i caused an abbrasion,
on the left hemisphere,
told you to steer clear,
would have been better,
to drink yourself dead with some Heineken Beer.
ill assemble you piece by piece like the Mir,
so hear,
the words that flow out my mouth
cuz i got tha clout
u doubt?
well u the dubious one.
im now FURIOUS SON

i got discipline,
i keep from sin,
im passive, like oxygen,
but if i feel threatened,
i morph into CO,
a silent killer,
a brain driller,
i enter ur mental matrix,
and program like i was Xatrix,
thats how you were insipired
towards all the hatred, of me
just mad, cause i got u bated
like a worm on a hook,
well i told you to pick up that book
for knowledge is the key
who leads the roads of tomorrow?
only time allows us to see,
until then, take on step at a time,
read, eat, and breathe,
and to these words you must heed.
plant today a seed,
tomorrow you have a tree,
that has yielded many leaves,
the part that sees light,
and leaves the plight,
of status quo,
it makes a dash to the sky,
but is failed because of competition,
and provocation
by the earth,
not to achieve a higher level,
but to fall to the ground at a bevel,
dont ever try to meddle,
with these lines,
u try to handle them, they crawl thru your spine
causin perm paralysis,
and a form of halitosis,
to affect what skills you thought you possessed,
i am the closest,
to reachin the promised land,
for it was in this rap,
that i was freed of my OWN trap,
and it is evident,
thru the travels of V,
that i have knowledge of many galaxies,
and knowledge is the tool i use,
that MCs fear and say i abuse
to get my skills Calibrated.

whooooo, i just typed all that up in about 10 minutes. im tired, let me know what you think.
 
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If it was true freestyling and off the top of your head, then its pretty good. I just doesn't flow very well, but thats to be expected with freestyling.

I'd love to add one of my own, but I suck and it would take me an hour to come up something. :eek:

Go to Bolt.com and hit their hip hop boards. There are quite a few people that love to do this sort of thing.
 

KidViciou$

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when i wrote this, i spat it out onto paper typing, that was when i freestyled it. i just retyped this from my project
 

KidViciou$

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oh yea, i was rhyming to one of Guru's song from moment of truth, so the flow is to that song. i forgot which song though :(
 

mosdef

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Damn that was too abstract for me to follow. I think there's a lot to say for someone who can think abstractly, but this means a lot more to you than anyone else. I think in general it's far more enjoyable if you're actually saying something... But mad props if you actually freestyled this.

-mosdef
 

mosdef

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Also it would really help if you avoided spelling errors, just takes away some credibility from you. I understand the circumstances but that's just general advice. Also for some reason writing U instead of U pisses me off, but that's just me ;). By the way check out these two sites if you wanna check out other people's work.

* Wodie - Freestyle Fanatics
* SOHH - Open Mic Forum

-mosdef
 

KidViciou$

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hahaha, like i said, i was retyping this from a sheet, and didnt care about spelling too much. i usually dont type like that. ill check out those sites tomorrow, i gotta sleep. peace
 

mosdef

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No problem Kid, keep up the good work. By the way what's the deal with you and Guru? Are you married to him? Haha just kidding. I see how he has influenced you though, he is definately abstract on some songs. Just realize that despite this he isn't really considered among the top 10 or even top 20 MCs of all time. Still the man definately has steez. Peace!

-mosdef
 

KidViciou$

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yea, i konw he isnt considered one of the best, but i consider him one of the best. he is probably the artist that introduced me to concious rap