For 1.5 hours of work, how's this?

Pastfinder

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Fair enough...but I don't need anything too fancy...just something to last 20 days and provides the needed info
 

isaacmacdonald

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don't know if you were looking for a critique but here it is:

1. the lighting on the left panel (with the links) combined with the yellow text makes me feel like I'm going blind. You might consider either choosing a darker color for the text, or making the background a little more muted.

2. When you click on the links and get to a page w/text, the text is butted right up against the left panel. That looks awkward.

3. this is a little more subjective, but I'd try and homogenize the outside images so that they don't look so thrown together.

that's all.
 

wyvrn

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Feb 15, 2000
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Put the area attractions page into several tables, instead of one long list.
Add a map to the hotel information page, and space out the instructions because they are hard to read. Use some colors and different font sizes also.
Ditch the graphics for the header and left side, and instead use solid colors which are easier on the eyes. Use the graphics as accents to the page layout instead of as the background.


Then you have a better page. :)
 

oniq

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Feb 17, 2002
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Yellow text on white? I'll agree with everyone else, looks like a half hour of work to me. Not much thought put into the colors or layout, no effort in the images.. blah.
 

dr150

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Sep 18, 2003
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The guys here are rousters and flambaiters.

You did a great job!

Cheers! :beer:
 

crisp82

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Apr 8, 2002
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Not bad mate, a little more work (adding to the pics page etc) and you'll be well on the way
 

minendo

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In that 1.5 hours of work you better have spent 5 minutes on that and 1 hour 25 minutes spanking it.