English Final Help

[CybDude]

For my English final (10th grade), I needed to create a video dealing with teenage life. This is what my group and I came up with. To say the least, it sucks. I am in desperate need of help. Not only does it not even hardly express what we wanted it to (going out to lunch is ok if you don?t get caught), it basically has no plot. Any help would be greatly appreciated.

Thank You,
-CybDude

PS: did this in a day, so its not like i have been working on it for a while

 

[minendo]

Originally posted by: CybDude
For my English final (10th grade), I needed to create a video dealing with teenage life. This is what my group and I came up with. To say the least, it sucks. I am in desperate need of help. Not only does it not even hardly express what we wanted it to (going out to lunch is ok if you don?t get caught), it basically has no plot. Any help would be greatly appreciated.

Thank You,
-CybDude

Teenage life varies from group to group though. Sorry haven't watched the video yet, but do not generalize teenage life.

 

[Dragnov]

Wow. I want ~5 minutes of my life back. (I couldn't even last the entire movie... thank god).

1. Pick a better topic. Sneaking out for lunch during high school?!!! Geez, c'mon. It's just an incredible lame story (sorry to be harsh, but its the truth), and hence you can't even get a plot from that.

2. Equalize the volume. Can't hear anything on what you're saying, but the music on the other hand is WAY too loud. Music should be very soft when you're talking or else it seems like its a greater priority. Music can be loud when theres nothing be said.

3. It's high school. I highly doubt the teacher will really give a damn as long as it shows you put in an effort. But your fellow classmates will hate you if they have to watch through that cr@p!.

 

[UglyCasanova]

Wow, I've seen porno's that had a better plot.

 

[Platypus]

which one is you?


btw, that video wasn't very good dude lol

 

[CybDude]

Yeah, i know it needs alot of work. I think the most important thing is to get more people speaking in it. Just looking for any other help. Its realy spose to be like a Saturday night live type thing. Kinda stuck on the topic now. Thanks again

 

[Ender]

Uhh... I don't know what was going on throughout the entire movie.