done thanks

[jimmyhaha]

done thanks

 

[WarmAndSCSI]

Originally posted by: jimmyhaha

Specialize in system maintenance, software/hardware recommendation, installation, upgrade & troubleshooting, Operating System migration, data recovery, installation & configuration of router & firewall for wireless network.

sentence seems long & awkward.

Any advice.

Thanks in advance.

Specialize in computer maintenance (installation, upgrading, etc.), hardware/software consultation, OS migration, data recovery, and networking

 

A period after "& troubleshooting" start a new sentence.

 

[WarmAndSCSI]

Originally posted by: WarmAndSCSI

Originally posted by: jimmyhaha

Specialize in system maintenance, software/hardware recommendation, installation, upgrade & troubleshooting, Operating System migration, data recovery, installation & configuration of router & firewall for wireless network.

sentence seems long & awkward.

Any advice.

Thanks in advance.

Specialize in computer maintenance (installation, upgrading, etc.), hardware/software consultation, OS migration, data recovery, and networking

Don't be too specific - the person reading your resume probably won't know what you're talking about anyways.

 

[jimmyhaha]

> Don't be too specific - the person reading your resume probably won't know what you're talking about anyways

so I am assuming most HR personnel are moron.. j/k..

Thanks for the advice.

 

[isaacmacdonald]

yeah, you can actually omit that stuff the guy put in paranthesies. the last comma (AKA the harvard comma) is optional.

Specialize in computer maintenance, hardware/software consultation, OS migration, data recovery, and networking

 

[jimmyhaha]

done. thanks