Does this girl have lyrical talent??

BadNewsBears

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rough draft of this song im workin on with falzprofit.. lol i never do sh!t like this i jus thought of the story theme n thought it would be fun... comments welcome

realize, i only get mad when i see me in ur eyes/
get caught in that hypnotic trance of lies/
you dont realize that you barkin up the wrong tree/
when you suspect dudes but dont think when u see a girl wit me/
you say "be easy" when u out there wit breezies/
i say "they need me" when im out there wit breezies/
its understandable to me that two can play that game/
cuz im in hip hop for the feelin, not the fame/
dudes dont realize that i can do what yall do/
an it wont mean sh!t ta me if you say that we through/
cuz if i had to choose, id marry h.e.r./
if u think im talkin bout a chick, man ion carre/
cuz i met this girl what i was 10 yrs old/
and i hooked up wit u when u was 10 yrs cold/
i thought that u was better bought than sold/
but id like to skip my life witchu, lemme press fast fowd'/


??? Shes pretty good.
 

BadNewsBears

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Well 4 out of four people who have seen it so far have liked it...

"""(Anonymous)
2004-07-20 16:45 (link)
ur talent never ceases to amaze me""""""

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[info]
2004-07-20 21:51 (link)
True hotness! Deep and entertaining. Have you ever seen anybody bob their head to someone's journal entry?""""""



Right from the comments section
 

Isshinryu

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Originally posted by: Munchies
Well 4 out of four people who have seen it so far have liked it...

"""(Anonymous)
2004-07-20 16:45 (link)
ur talent never ceases to amaze me""""""

"""""
[info]
2004-07-20 21:51 (link)
True hotness! Deep and entertaining. Have you ever seen anybody bob their head to someone's journal entry?""""""



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Good for them. You asked for an opinion, I gave you mine, don't get defensive.
 

Isshinryu

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Originally posted by: Munchies
Im not defending. Just. Replying.
Tired..

My bad. It just sounded like one of those typical whiny responses.

"You don't like it? Well these four people do, so you're wrong."

Argh, I'm tired too.