Critique this web page please

[GasX]

Bronx Developmental Center

What would you add, subtract, change?

 

[pyonir]

the links font is hard to read.

and i don't like how the title 'flows' into the page.

 

[SWirth86]

The font on the left is hard to read, and the page doesnt center itself......there's a large white space on the right.

 

[amnesiac]

Reminds me of something from Robocop.

 

[GasX]

I like the rounded corners on the thumbnails in the gallery. I agree about the links font.

 

[geekender]

Page looks good. But another vote that the font is hard to read. Every link leads away from the page. Why don't you want me to stay there? Why not have the pages open in a frame? Also, there is no unified color theme. (Red white, blue, grey.) Of course, that's just me being picky.

 

[GasX]

Anyone else?

 

[911paramedic]

The main page ties to get you to go the "galley" even thought I have no idea what the site is about. It takes way too long for the title to load at the top before the rest of the graphics.

I still do no tknow what that site is about.

sorry, David.

 

[777php]

I think the flash title banner has to go.
Keep the banner a static image or have the text always be visible with other elements that are animated.