Critique this image please

[ThePresence]

I was Bored.
I did this in 45 minutes. Like? Dislike? Comments?
(I never do stuff like this, this was my first shot at this kinda work).

 

[johnjohn320]

Nifty.

 

[Maleficus]

Not bad at all, gonna continue to work on it add textures or something?

 

[ThePresence]

Originally posted by: Maleficus
Not bad at all, gonna continue to work on it add textures or something?

Maybe, if I get bored again.

 

[CanOWorms]

What did you make it in?

 

[ThePresence]

Originally posted by: CanOWorms
What did you make it in?

this might surprise you, but I didnt use a 3d program. This is all made out of vector shapes in CorelDraw.

 

[Mucman]

That's pretty cool! I am brutal at stuff like that...

 

[ThePresence]

bump for the morning crowd.

 

[Rallispec]

looks really good... esp. for using a vector program.. The shading is a little off though.

looks great though! nice job thepresence

 

[ThePresence]

Originally posted by: Rallispec
looks really good... esp. for using a vector program.. The shading is a little off though.

looks great though! nice job thepresence

Where is the shading off?

 

[Alphathree33]

I could make it in AutoCAD in less time =p

but I do like it

 

[Rallispec]

Originally posted by: ThePresence

Originally posted by: Rallispec
looks really good... esp. for using a vector program.. The shading is a little off though.

looks great though! nice job thepresence

Where is the shading off?

i was just noticing how on the closest wall, you couldnt really tell where the wall begins and the roof ends.. same with the overhang on the front above the door.

the more i look it at though, the more i really like it. People with this kind of artistic talent make me and my n00b photoshop talent very jealous.

i just noticed the cool design over the door. i cant believe this only took 45 minutes to do.

 

[ThePresence]

Originally posted by: Rallispec

Originally posted by: ThePresence

Originally posted by: Rallispec
looks really good... esp. for using a vector program.. The shading is a little off though.

looks great though! nice job thepresence

Where is the shading off?

i was just noticing how on the closest wall, you couldnt really tell where the wall begins and the roof ends.. same with the overhang on the front above the door.

the more i look it at though, the more i really like it. People with this kind of artistic talent make me and my n00b photoshop talent very jealous.

i just noticed the cool design over the door. i cant believe this only took 45 minutes to do.

Well, the roof and wall are supposed to be the same shade in that area. Thanx for your comments though.

 

[Rallispec]

Originally posted by: ThePresence

Originally posted by: Rallispec

Originally posted by: ThePresence

Originally posted by: Rallispec
looks really good... esp. for using a vector program.. The shading is a little off though.

looks great though! nice job thepresence

Where is the shading off?

i was just noticing how on the closest wall, you couldnt really tell where the wall begins and the roof ends.. same with the overhang on the front above the door.

the more i look it at though, the more i really like it. People with this kind of artistic talent make me and my n00b photoshop talent very jealous.

i just noticed the cool design over the door. i cant believe this only took 45 minutes to do.

Well, the roof and wall are supposed to be the same shade in that area. Thanx for your comments though.

dont get me wrong, i think its great.
if i had the creativity and skill that you have, then i might not suck at graphics



have you ever worked with a 3d CAD program before?

 

[ThePresence]

Originally posted by: Rallispec

Originally posted by: ThePresence

Originally posted by: Rallispec

Originally posted by: ThePresence

Originally posted by: Rallispec
looks really good... esp. for using a vector program.. The shading is a little off though.

looks great though! nice job thepresence

Where is the shading off?

i was just noticing how on the closest wall, you couldnt really tell where the wall begins and the roof ends.. same with the overhang on the front above the door.

the more i look it at though, the more i really like it. People with this kind of artistic talent make me and my n00b photoshop talent very jealous.

i just noticed the cool design over the door. i cant believe this only took 45 minutes to do.

Well, the roof and wall are supposed to be the same shade in that area. Thanx for your comments though.

dont get me wrong, i think its great.
if i had the creativity and skill that you have, then i might not suck at graphics



have you ever worked with a 3d CAD program before?

Nope. I once worked with AnimaTek World Builder which is a really cool program but I tired of it quickly, and I didnt really know the program well.

 

[UberDave]

nice

 

[hoihtah]

so... what's inside?

 

[ThePresence]

Originally posted by: hoihtah
so... what's inside?

Wouldn't you like to know.

 

[CraigRT]

Yeah, I could never make that. I have nothing when it comes to working with images and in imaging programs... no clue.

looks cool

 

[ThePresence]

Originally posted by: Maleficus
Not bad at all, gonna continue to work on it add textures or something?

Just curious, what kind of textures do you think I should use?

 

[ISAslot]

Originally posted by: hoihtah
so... what's inside?

The Interior

Done in MSPaint.

 

[Martin]

Originally posted by: ThePresence

Originally posted by: Maleficus
Not bad at all, gonna continue to work on it add textures or something?

Just curious, what kind of textures do you think I should use?

Perhaps white stone for the side and red ceramic for the roof.

its nice

 

[FrustratedUser]

Originally posted by: ISAslot

Originally posted by: hoihtah
so... what's inside?

The Interior

Done in MSPaint.

LOL!

Nice stuff Presence.

 

[ThePresence]

Originally posted by: ISAslot

Originally posted by: hoihtah
so... what's inside?

The Interior

Done in MSPaint.

Thats not too bad for a MS Paint n00b.

 

[TNTrulez]

Originally posted by: Alphathree33
I could make it in AutoCAD in less time =p

but I do like it

yep