Critique my website.

[AdamDuritz99]

Hello, I'm just about finished with my new website. Well actually it's a web store. The web site is not live as of yet. 911guides.net

All opinions/suggestions welcomed. Feel free to test all aspects of the store, including creating test accounts and test buying products. The credit card process isn't live and I don't directly collect or store cc numbers, but I would advise to use 4111 1111 1111 1111 as a test card number with any expire date.

peace
sean

 

[thirdlegstump]

No you may not post a link so we can critique it. :roll:

 

[GoingUp]

Originally posted by: deathkoba
No you may not post a link so we can critique it. :roll:

 

[sniperruff]

go ahead

 

[AdamDuritz99]

Originally posted by: deathkoba
No you may not post a link so we can critique it. :roll:

Hey, I just didn't know if it goes against some sort of spamming or advertisment rule here.

Anyway, the link is posted.

Sean

 

[AdamDuritz99]

Bumped for morning crew.

 

[imported_Ed]

nice look to it.

 

[Wizkid]

Nice, simple look. I like it!

"Fire & Rescue Field Guid" should have an "e" at the end 😉

 

[BAMAVOO]

I think the enlarged photos are too blurry. Other than that, very nice.

 

[AgaBoogaBoo]

I think the site looks great in general, you might want to have a simple type of logo made or something, bu other than that it's nice and simple.

On this page though the title says "Guid" instead of "Guide": http://www.911guides.net/fire-rescue-field-guid-p-58.html

Feel free to PM me with any questions you might have, I'll be glad to help out.

 

[AdamDuritz99]

Originally posted by: BAMAVOO
I think the enlarged photos are too blurry. Other than that, very nice.

Yah, I have better pics, that just haven't been modified to work with my website. Clean and crisper pics will be uploaded tomorrow sometime.

The "e" was fixed. Thanks guys.

Any other thoughts? I have a fairly lengthy terms and condition and privacy notice. My shipping and returns isn't quite detailed though do to lack of what needs to be said. Does the shipping and returns section seem atiquit to everybody? If not, what needs to be added?

Sean

 

[thirdlegstump]

At first glance I have no idea what the site is about. Maybe a big mission statement could help those that are a little slow.

 

[AdamDuritz99]

Originally posted by: deathkoba
At first glance I have no idea what the site is about. Maybe a big mission statement could help those that are a little slow.

That's not a bad idea, but I'll have to find a good way to incorporate it.