Critique my resume

[wyvrn]

This is my updated resume, I am not sure how good it looks. I am open to any and all suggestions. I am applying for some internships next semester.

 

[Deleted member 4644]

Where you say you supervised one technician. You might want to just say "served as supervisor." That way, they might think you supervised several techs... hehe.

Other than that, looks good.

 

[wyvrn]

I supervised more than one just forgot the "s" hehe. I'll go change it, Thanks 🙂

Originally posted by: LordSegan
Where you say you supervised one technician. You might want to just say "served as supervisor." That way, they might think you supervised several techs... hehe.

Other than that, looks good.

 

[SXMP]

Correct me if I am wrong, but aren't resumes only supposed to be 1 page long?

 

[CanOWorms]

So you have two undergrad degrees in Management Information Systems or is that Dallas one a Masters?

 

[adlep]

Yes, make it one page and make sure to convert it to the pdf format......
Aside of everything you resume looks kind of like mine, good job...
Also, you want to clear out your education.
For example:
Bechelor of Science in Managment Information Systems.
Edit: I understand, you are a junior now and have about 1 year to go...
The elegant way out of that is:
University of Texas, Austin TX
Bechelor of Science in Managment Information Systems
Junior Standing, Degree Expected August 2004.


...
See my resume at computerfix...

 

[PunDogg]

Originally posted by: SXMP
Correct me if I am wrong, but aren't resumes only supposed to be 1 page long?

yeah thats the best layout one can have, is one page, the second should be for references and stuff like that, put all your stuff on one page

Try taking some spacing out of the top, put your heading in the header and not as a seperate Part

Dogg

 

[adlep]

Yeah, take out references, no one cares about that anymore...
And shrink it out to one page, even at the cost of spacing/font.

 

[wyvrn]

Thanks for all the suggestions. I updated it to one page and pdf format. How does it look now?

 

[Regs]

That is a lot of schooling. Very formal resume, so you might need to fluff up the cover page when it comes time to pick a company. I saw the word "Enron" though, and screamed.


AHHHhHAHHHHAhh

 

[GigaCluster]

Supported end users internet dialup and DSL connectivity
should be
Supported end users' Internet dial-up and DSL connectivity

 

[wyvrn]

one last bump

 

[911paramedic]

Enron - "No soup for you!!"