Critique my illustrator final

[thejnaitor]

Hey everybody,

If you've got a sec, take a gander at a self portrait I did for my Adobe Illustrator class if you wouldn't mind.

Original pic: http://tomp.users.skurvey.info/DSC_0028.jpg

My version: http://tomp.users.skurvey.info/AllDoneFinalForReals.jpg

Any comments and critiquing are appreciated.

Thanks!

 

[ForumMaster]

that's cool. can't you add some other color though? it looks kind of dull.

 

[apinomus]

Gotta find some way to brighten those teeth.

KIDDING! Looks good but I don't dig the whole rotoscoped comeback fad going around.

 

[thejnaitor]

@ ForumMaster: Yeah, I thought it did look a tad dull, too, but I'm not really sure where I can add color. I mean, it's of me, and I am pretty much a white boy with brown hair... hehe.

@apinomus: Hehe... I only wish my teeth were that white in real life 😛. I'm not sure what rotoscoping is (disembodied head?), but I just did it like it is because it was simpler than trying to do the whole picture.

Thanks for the feedback both of you.