Originally posted by: OdiN
Is this your first wedding? Ceremony lasted about 20 seconds right?
They don't look too different from my first wedding - which means lots of room for improvement.
A lot of the groups are underexposed or not balanced correctly with the light from the stained glass windows. The few outdoor shots I saw could have benefited from fill flash. What kind of equipment were you working with?
The poses are pretty stale for the groups, and I don't think you spent enough time with just the couple. I usually will spend about 30 minutes with the couple at various locations and poses and things. But I don't like formal group shots anyway - though people do like them - they are stale I think and if I can do other things I will, but can't always. The wedding I did this weekend I wanted to do some other things for groups of the bridal party, but they were an hour and a half late for the photography which left about 45 minutes for what groups I could get before the ceremony, and that ran over so they only had the limo for a certain time and that ran into my time after the wedding, but oh well that's how things go and it's no fault of mine. My contract specifies that there is to be a 120 minute window either before or after (or combined) for photography of groups, etc. for the best results. If not, I'm not responsible. But we did get good shots, just not as much as I would have liked.
Oh..back to your photos
One thing - you got some good captures during the ceremony showing some emotion - and at the end of the day, capturing a moment becomes more important that the technically correct exposure, etc. - so long as it's good enough people will like them.
I think that overall the couple should be thrilled with them - they wouldn't have had anything otherwise.
I'd have to take a closer look at things to critique more specific aspects, but don't have time at the moment. I will try to review them a bit more later.
Is this something you want to do or want to become better at?