critique a logo design for me?

ajpa123

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Nice !

I would like it better if the lower fin went behind that first Z.

I would transform both the fins so that the fish looks like its going into the background.

Jus my opinion.

AJ.
 

UnatcoAgent

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Try moving the fish to the right of the text, so that your eye reads the name and then sees the fish. Also do a higher quality image for the fish, as it seems pixelated. Reduce the size of the smile, I would understate the smile before I overstate it, as you have. Also get rid of the gradients in the fish, it needs simplicity if it is a logo. Maybe just two shades of yellow instead of yellow to white. The placement of the fins seems random, there is no alignment, not sure if you did that on purpose, can't recall exactly what a fish looks like, but for the purpose of a logo alignment is key. Maybe use two different font styles in the name, dazzleFISH, play around with that idea, it will amplify the dazzling abilities of your fish (getting tired here). Can't think of anything else, looks pretty good. If you do anything though, move the fish and I still recommend to the right. You have to keep in mind the form of the logo, where the eye travels.

- Rob