crap ... help with John Lennon paper?

Maverick2002

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John Lennon fans/buffs, I NEED YOUR HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok, so for those of you who helped with part 1 of the research paper, thanks a bunch.

But anyway, here's part two, the confirmation/refutation essay. I'm supposed to come up with 6 ideas (with supporting details) confirming my thesis.

Which is: John Lennon's troubled childhood and various emotional traumas throughout life influenced his protest against violence.

Here's my problem though, I can't find any DIRECT correlations between his traumas and his protest against violence. For instance, his mother sent him away as a child, then died on his 18th bday. He wrote a song mourning her. Great, but that doesn't have anything to do with anti-violence. His father deserted, then came back to see him later in life. Another scar, but no cigar. He had miscarriages with Ono, but none of it related to anti-violence. Then he died in 1980. What influence did that have? <-- this last one I might actually be able to think of. My only option seems to be to find exactly during what years these things happened to him and try and weave them in with anything he did during those years to protest violence and try to argue that they influenced each other. I'm screwed. Can anyone with massive John Lennon knowledge help me?
 

wnied

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I'm supposed to come up with 6 ideas

Thats right, YOU are supposed to come up with those six ideas.

Better get crackin kiddo.
~wnied~
 

Storm

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Btw did you end up buying that pink case for your gf? If so how much was the shipping from New Zealand?
 

Yossarian

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If you can't come up with any ideas to support your thesis, what does that say about your thesis?
 

Maverick2002

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Originally posted by: PipBoy
If you can't come up with any ideas to support your thesis, what does that say about your thesis?

Well my proff thought it was great. Nevermind.
 

Steve819

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Six ideas for the sake of having six ideas sounds like overkill and potentially causing a lot more stress than necessary. Do extensive research and present your findings, if you have 2 ideas or 12 ideas, it doesn't matter. What matters is how you present your case, and how effectively you can back up your thesis with facts and research.

Your prof sounds like a idiot for suggesting six reasons.

 

Steve819

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The other thing I would caution against is being too wedded to proving your initial thesis correct. Research may show that you are completely wrong and by trying to prove a incorrect thesis, your paper would seriously suffer. Maybe look into other causes of Lennon's anti-violence stance.

 

wolf papa

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maybe not the specific causes you're looking for, but -

childhood in post WW2 Britain, probably saw the effects of war on the landscape and veterans.

death of Stu Sutcliff, brain hemorrhage, possibly due to injuries in a fight

friendship with Brian Epstein, who got beat up for being gay