Could some of you please review a website I'm building?

[PretendHer]

I just started last nite. Never done this before but, I have done desktop publishing extensively so, I get how to do it, I just want some ideas as to filling space without a bunch of fluff and puff AND advertisements.

I do intend to post some more pics of myself and of art that I like, that sort of thing, along with funny chit too...I LOVE TO LAUGH!

Critiqing is fine and I would particularly like some good tips on adding to it and, for directions to sites that offer animation clip art with a twisted flair!! Along with some sexual inuendo.

So, have at it and please, feel free to post your comments on my forum boards. Or, here...whichever.

http://JamiesJurisdiction.homestead.com/index.html


THANKS

 

[PretendHer]

Bump (and grind)

C'mom gus/gals....I want to work on this thing and I need some input...Can't sleep.

Please?

 

[Czar]

http://JamiesJurisdiction.homestead.com/index.html
linkfied

 

[Czar]

I LOVE THIS PART, spank my monkey

 

[PretendHer]

Thanks Cszar...haven't mastered that one yet.

 

[dennilfloss]

Hi Jamie,

Using IE 5.5 sp1 @ 1152x864 to view it:

The red colour is a bit agressive IMO. I would go for something less stimulating. But maybe that is your intent. :Q

'Haven't we all wished at one" overlaps with 'when...well, almost'

Your line overlaps 'Message Board'.

I'll let the pros take over now. Good luck.

Life In The Fast Lane (Eagles)

 

[cpars]

Nice Pic, but the design looks a bit scattered and kinda thrown together.Look around the web and borrow some design ideas.

 

[Renob]

so good so far

 

[gittyup]

I didn't recognize Uranus!


The monkey is great!

 

[Missus]

Funny!

 

[PretendHer]

I know it's kinda scattered...that's why I need asked for ideas...I'm working on it. Thanks for the input though