Could some of you please review a website I'm building?

PretendHer

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I just started last nite. Never done this before but, I have done desktop publishing extensively so, I get how to do it, I just want some ideas as to filling space without a bunch of fluff and puff AND advertisements.

I do intend to post some more pics of myself and of art that I like, that sort of thing, along with funny chit too...I LOVE TO LAUGH!

Critiqing is fine and I would particularly like some good tips on adding to it and, for directions to sites that offer animation clip art with a twisted flair!! Along with some sexual inuendo. ;)

So, have at it and please, feel free to post your comments on my forum boards. Or, here...whichever.

http://JamiesJurisdiction.homestead.com/index.html


THANKS
 

PretendHer

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Bump (and grind)

C'mom gus/gals....I want to work on this thing and I need some input...Can't sleep.

Please?
 

dennilfloss

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Hi Jamie,

Using IE 5.5 sp1 @ 1152x864 to view it:

The red colour is a bit agressive IMO. I would go for something less stimulating. But maybe that is your intent. :Q

'Haven't we all wished at one" overlaps with 'when...well, almost'

Your line overlaps 'Message Board'.

I'll let the pros take over now. Good luck. :)

Life In The Fast Lane (Eagles)
 

cpars

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Nice Pic, but the design looks a bit scattered and kinda thrown together.Look around the web and borrow some design ideas.
 

PretendHer

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I know it's kinda scattered...that's why I need asked for ideas...I'm working on it. Thanks for the input though