Constructive critism on my gaming laptop article

[ashkeogh]

How can I improve my article: it should be for people who have some computer knowledge, is it laid out well and should I add more content.

Thanks in advance




This is your blog with 25 other articles by you.

This is called self-promotion here and it's not allowed


esquared
Anandtech Forum Director

 

[T_Yamamoto]

This is more of less advertisement

 

[gorcorps]

It has absolutely no details on the systems (unless it's part of the hyperlink title), which if I'm a PC person I would need. You claim high value in one of them, but you don't say why or even what the price is. It looks like you threw this together in a few minutes with little more info than the specs you read on Amazon, so it's not useful to PC people or the regular joe. If this is serious and not just a spam post, you really need to actually put some content in it.