Comment on this sad poem

[Raj]

You tell me you love me, yet you want another.
You tell me you'll only be mine, yet you see no harm in letting anothers lips touch yours.
You think you love me. but, fail to see that love is that which can only be given to one and only one person.
I know I did You Many wrongs,
treated you bad, made you cry.
and then, along he came to dry your eye.
he said a few words, that comforted you.
made you feel special, he listened to you.
you're not in the wrong, but neither am I.
Is it coincidence, that it had to be him?
god has then chosen me to condemn.
as, you find ease, in his words.
as, you find comfort, your cry is heard.
now, you've found someone, to hold on to.
so you can let go of me, cause you're through.
its made it easier for you to let go.
so, thats what you do. just easily let go.
just let go, just let go, you've let go.


Loveless

 

[Donuts]

It made my head hurt to read it.

 

[flippinfleck]

While we are on the topic of poetry, one of the girls at my work wrote this one...


As I walk along the empty beach
The wind whispers your name
There is so much I want to say to you
But I?m speechless just the same
Every time I think of you
My heart burns with desire
I want to hold you forever
In loves eternal fire
How can the heavens deny this?
A love that was meant to be
Something so strong and so cherished
Must one day, be set free
As the stars shine bright on the crashing waves
My only thought is you
To hope that maybe someday
You will love me too


Sounds like you both need a hug, want her number?

 

[SackOfAllTrades]

Both your poems sound fine.

 

[BuffySummers]

Big yourself up sunshine

 

[bleuiko]

go eat a cookie... cookies solves everything!