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[Marty]

Its that time again... I have another assigned web page for my web design class. This one is supposed to be pretty small; its only supposed to demonstrate your ability to use basic flash stuff. Its not completely done yet; the products page will get you to a dead end, but the remaining two pages are pretty much done.

Here is the link: elitewash

A friend of mine asked me to post his as well, here is the link: suds.

Any comments?

BTW These pages were made with Flash MX, which means you'll need the latest Macromedia Flash player to view them.

 

[pac1085]

Heh all I get is a blank gray page for both of em...

sigh i wish macromedia would release flash player 6 for linux..

 

[AnthraX101]

http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2F24.24.22.51%2Felitewash%2F&charset=%28detect+automatically%29&doctype=Inline

Won't even render in Opera 6.0

Armani

 

[pac1085]

Yeah I tried both Konqueror and Mozilla

 

[tm37]

Looks Neato to me

 

[ohtwell]

I like both.

I like the little spinning washing machine on your friends.

IMO your's seems a lot more professional.





: ) Amanda

 

[kami]

Transition times are a little long. Load times are pretty bad too considering the graphics. Neat though

 

[Marty]

You are going to need Macromedia Flash Player 6 (I think) in order to view these pages, they were made with Flash MX.

 

[DanFungus]

Originally posted by: kami
Transition times are a little long. Load times are pretty bad too considering the graphics. Neat though

 

[mithrandir2001]

Originally posted by: AnthraX101
http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2F24.24.22.51%2Felitewash%2F&charset=%28detect+automatically%29&doctype=Inline

Won't even render in Opera 6.0

That's why I don't use Opera.

 

[rh71]

I wish they taught us Flash when I was in school a short 3 years ago. Took a lot of motivation to learn on my own...

Anyway, you need to kill the "powerful" text layer a little sooner because it can still be seen when "sleek" comes in. Why not alpha fade it all the way to 0% ? Other than that, nice and smooth transition effects.

 

[Marty]

ttt, i did some work on the products page and think i am pretty much done. any last minute suggestions?