This might have been more effective:
Dear Friend,
I am Barrister KUTA IBRAHIM, the Personal Attorney to a Foreign
Contractor, who worked with a Multinational Oil Firm in Nigeria. On the 31st of October 1999,my client, Mr. Larry Kowalsky and his wife, an American Nationals were involved in an Egyptian Air 1990 Plane Crash. All occupants of the Aero plane unfortunately lost
there lives. Since then I have made several inquiries to your Embassy to locate any of my clients extended relatives, this has also proved
unsuccessful. After these several unsuccessful attempts, I decided to trace his relatives over the Internet, to locate any member of his family but to no avail, hence you are contacted.
I have contacted you to assist me in repatriating the money left
behind by my client before they get confiscated or declared unserviceable by the Bank where this huge deposits were lodged.
Particularly, the Bank where the deceased had an account
valued at about US$11 million dollars has issued me a notice to
provide the next of kin or have the account confiscated within the next twenty official working days. Since I have been unsuccessful in locating the the relatives for over 4 years now I seek your consent to present you as the next of kin to the deceased so that the
proceeds of this account valued at $11 million dollars can be paid to you and then you and I can share this money. 70% tome and 25% to ,while 5% should be for expenses or tax as your government may require, I have all necessary legal documents that can be used to back up any claim we may make.
All I require is your $5 paypal contribution. I also request for your private telephone number, fax number for easy
and more confidential communication.
Regards
Barrister KUTA IBRAHIM
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