Can someone help me proof read an attachment email for my resume?

[eLiTeGoodGuy]

Gotta send an email with my Resume in it and I would like to write something in the email that I send. I have no clue what to write, and when I do write it I feel like a 2 year old is writing it

Please send resume with salary requirements to: xxxxxxx@xxxxxxxx.com

If I were to post it, can I get some constructive criticism? And any other suggestions that you would recommend.

I would like to thank you for taking the time to read my resume.
I have several years experience with Cellular/PCS equipment, as well as several years experience with computer hardware/software/networking. I have been applying this knowledge and experience in a customer service and sales environment.

Resume

I am completely stumped right now lol



What else should I put in it? What should I write for Salary requirements? Should it be something like "As far as salary I would expect a competitive wage for anyone in an entry level position"

 

[minendo]

You could start by actually including your resume including education, experience, etc.

 

[GoldenGuppy]

Competitve pay is good

Or if you really want (are desperate for) the job, say : "Pay is not a big issue with me, I do not care about pay... I care about the WORK EXPERIENCE and training that I can gain by working with ______ . "

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[TMPadmin]

I like to put a line near the end saying something like; "I am confident our interaction will lead to an agreement were we both have something to offer one another". I don't have my cover letter so I don't remember the exact wording but it's implying a win win situation. Successful people like that.