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Can some one help me with grammar or syntax on my resume

slinetz

Senior member
well , i have been in america for 10 years with college degree, and all the whistle and bell. But english is not my native langugage, I don't want to make silly grammar mistake on my resume. Can Some one take a look and let me know if it is good. thanks...

please let me know if following sentence have some grammar or syntax mistake thanks.


Looking for a challenging Sales or Account Management position that requires lots of communications, energies, and people to people skills with some technical background.

 
I wouldn't post the whole thing, just be prepared because we aren't always the most helpful bunch of people 😛
If you are a recent college grad your university may have a carrer center of some kind for this as well.
 
Originally posted by: slinetz
Sold many hard-to-sell items - including out-of-date desktops and printers - by targeting customers' needs and using various sales techniques. Also addressed customers? complaints and processed returns.
Fixed.
 
Computer and Electronic Equipment Sales and Customer Service

Markteted and sold niche specific computer equipment by using a multitude of different sales techniques. Responsible for finding a customer satisfactory resolution for complaints and returns.

Best I got.
 
Originally posted by: jumpr
Originally posted by: slinetz
Sold many hard-to-sell items - including out-of-date desktops and printers - by targeting customers' needs and using various sales techniques. Also addressed customers? complaints and processed returns.
Fixed.

now thats the ATOT spirt!

Thanks for being so nice :thumbsup:
 
Originally posted by: walla
Originally posted by: slinetz
But english is not my native langugage...

You don't say... 🙂

LOL...reminds me of zoolander.

A Eugoogaly!?

Huh?

You know a Eugoogaly? One who eugoogalizes? Or did you think I was too stupid to know what a Eugooglizer was?
 
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