Can anyone help me proofread a research paper for english?

[DarkManX]

im almost done is there anyone whose an english major or just anyone thats good at this stuff willing to read it and give me some tips?

 

[davee]

how many pages

 

[DarkManX]

has to be 10.. i want someone to read the first half so far.

 

[OulOat]

Originally posted by: DarkManX
im always done (period?) is there anyone whose an english major or just anyone thats good at this stuff willing to read it and give me some tips?

I can tell this will be a long night for that someone 😉

 

[jimmyhaha]

why don't u just upload the paper in PDF somewhere so we can give u some opinion..

federal minimum wage = $5.15 / hour ....

 

[Spac3d]

Originally posted by: jimmyhaha
why don't u just upload the paper in PDF somewhere so we can give u some opinion..

federal minimum wage = $5.15 / hour ....

Why not in HTML format... I am sure that is universal considering everyone reading this is viewing a webpage right now😛

 

[civad]

Originally posted by: jimmyhaha
federal minimum wage = $5.15 / hour ....

What about stock options/bonus/ profit sharing/401k?

 

[DarkManX]

lol i wrote that messege while talking on the phone.

 

[Bullhonkie]

Originally posted by: DarkManX
lol i wrote that messege while talking on the phone.

So what's your excuse for this one? 😉

 

[civad]

Originally posted by: DarkManX
lol i wrote that messege while talking on the phone.

Now I know why he needs a proofreader...
nothing personal, just an observation...😛

 

[DarkManX]

http://mywebpages.comcast.net/djrkd/hw/research.htm there it is.

 

[PCMarine]

Originally posted by: DarkManX
http://mywebpages.comcast.net/djrkd/hw/research.htm there it is.

Sorry if I offend you but...

Oh my...reading just the first paragraph makes my 12 year old brother sound like shakespeare! Especially in a formal paper you *NEVER EVER* state "This paper will tell you." Not to mention your sentences are only a few words each.

 

[bigredguy]

Originally posted by: PCMarine

Originally posted by: DarkManX
http://mywebpages.comcast.net/djrkd/hw/research.htm there it is.

Sorry if I offend you but...

Oh my...reading just the first paragraph makes my 12 year old brother sound like shakespeare! Especially in a formal paper you *NEVER EVER* state "This paper will tell you." Not to mention your sentences are only a few words each.

Yeah you're right, I have no idea how to even offer help or advice other than take an english class or two.

 

[Krk3561]

Originally posted by: DarkManX
lol i wrote that messege while talking on the phone.

I think you wrote it while puffing the cheeba 😀

 

[bolomite]

I'le healp yoo, im gud at engolissh

 

[ErmanC]

I'd review it for you, but then you'd get a "C".... I always did. 🙂