Business site suggestions

[Lepard]

I've put up a small template on how i want my business website to look like:

http://www.romanpc.com/index2.htm

What do you guys think? Is there any way i can make it better?
Constructive criticism doesn't hurt.

 

[AgaBoogaBoo]

Nice and simple design, I like it :beer:

 

[laurenlex]

Opens :beer: and waits in anticipation of not-so-constructive critizism.

 

[tfinch2]

Too plain.

 

[OdiN]

The design I like...simple and to the point. I do not like the logo though, it could be a lot better. Layout is good though.

 

[everman]

Not enough there to really say.

 

[Ketteringo]

boooring

 

[Lepard]

ok...

what can i do to make it less boring and less plain?

 

[tfinch2]

Originally posted by: Lepard
ok...

what can i do to make it less boring and less plain?

cowbells

 

[AgaBoogaBoo]

Originally posted by: Lepard
ok...

what can i do to make it less boring and less plain?

Look at what oswd.org has

 

[Epic Fail]

Zzzzzz......

 

[Valkerie]

Originally posted by: AgaBoogaBoo

Originally posted by: Lepard
ok...

what can i do to make it less boring and less plain?

Look at what oswd.org has

Cluttered design, very sloppy.

As for your site, host, it's too plain and simple, unsophisticated.

You want a site that is very attractive.

i.e.
monarchcomputer.com
dell.com
microsoft.com
newegg.com
alienware.com
http://www.energizer.com/ --> This site owns Duracell.com because of loading times with flash? You have to be kidding me...
http://www.square-enix.com/na/index_f.html

Personally, the web page designers need an artistic mind, yet very strong organizational skills. You have to be the best to survive in the business world, amen to that.

 

[Lepard]

Originally posted by: AgaBoogaBoo

Originally posted by: Lepard
ok...

what can i do to make it less boring and less plain?

Look at what oswd.org has

Thanks for the link. Ill check it out more if i can't get a good site up.

I made the site simple because i won't be doing anything like selling items,
but i kind of figured that people like simplicity more than style when dealing
with business sites. The site is just a front for a local computer repair
business so people can request service as well as check prices and
read-up on what we do.

So i guess maybe going with a flashier design might also draw more customers.

Well its back to the drawing board if i can't think of a way to make it
more attractive.

 

[Lepard]

up for a little more feedback

 

[junkerman123]

it's clean and simple. I think your fonts could be better, maybe a little flashier. I'd also make the navbar less thick, and maybe place the headlines elswhere (up top?). Overall, it's clean lookign and pretty good.

 

[Lepard]

once more for the road.

so
simple = bad or unprofessional

ill see if i can jazz it up a bit though
maybe give it a bit more color to make it stand out,
maybe a greyish background.