Business E-Mail etiquette

TechnoPro

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Drawing a blank on conventions...

A client of mine wants me to e-mail certain information to 2 people within another company, all on the same e-mail as opposed to 1 e-mail per person. I have these peoples full names and e-mail addresses.

Do I address the e-mail with "Ms. Smith, Mr. Jones:"? Or "Ms. Smith and Mr. Jones:"? "Or "Dear Ms. Smith and Mr. Jones:"? In reality, his last name comes before hers alphabetically. Personally, I never use dear in business corepondence. I also never address e-mail to more than one person.

What's the rule here? Thanks?
 

TechnoPro

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Originally posted by: compnovice
Address to the more important person and cc to the other....

Sound advice, but I have been asked to address both of them...
 

Whisper

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No dear, use & or and, address the higher-up person first. If they're both the same position/level, then I'd personally address the woman first.
 

TechnoPro

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Originally posted by: Whisper
No dear, use & or and, address the higher-up person first. If they're both the same position/level, then I'd personally address the woman first.

Thanks, I appreciate it.
 

AdamSnow

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Originally posted by: Whisper
No dear, use & or and, address the higher-up person first. If they're both the same position/level, then I'd personally address the woman first.

I agree.
 

Specop 007

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Originally posted by: Whisper
No dear, use & or and, address the higher-up person first. If they're both the same position/level, then I'd personally address the woman first.

Ahhh, discrimination lives!


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