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[MonKENy]

no one cares so ill move on...Thanks for the uhhh...advice?

 

[MrWizzard]

Roses are red
Anandtech Forums are blue
MonKENy wants to write poems
And I don?t want him too.

 

[moshquerade]

Originally posted by: MrWizzard
Roses are red
Anandtech Forums are blue
MonKENy wants to write poems
And I don?t want him too.

:laugh:

i'm laughing here, for real.

 

[judasmachine]

I'm a writer too, but I don't think their would be much interest here.

EDIT: as has already been demonstrated.

 

[Mxylplyx]

Yeah, here

 

[Modeps]

Create a Blogger account, Post some stuff there, post the link here ONCE, the end.

 

[nakedfrog]

Did that ATOT writer's collective ever take off? I got my invitation, but never joined because I'm a procrastinator, and, well, you know...

 

[meltdown75]

Unacceptable. Withdraw the question immediately.

 

[dainthomas]

There once was a man from Nantucket..

 

[GasX]

If you are trying to make a career of being a writer, b y all means post your stuff here. It will help you learn the important first lesson of the publishing:

Rule #1: get used to getting your stuff shit on

 

[NuclearNed]

Originally posted by: nakedfrog
Did that ATOT writer's collective ever take off? I got my invitation, but never joined because I'm a procrastinator, and, well, you know...

I got some email notifications from it, but they quit coming. I never participated. I wonder if it started out strong, but people eventually lost interest.

 

[pontifex]

Originally posted by: Mwilding
If you are trying to make a career of being a writer, b y all means post your stuff here. It will help you learn the important first lesson of the publishing:

Rule #1: get used to getting your stuff shit on

and atot will shit on it whether its good or not.

 

[Captante]

Yes there is !!!

I submit the above as irrefutable evidence.

 

[MonKENy]

And the public has spoken....ill withdraw my question like 10 secs before i posted it lol. Carry on boys and girls!

 

[pyonir]

Originally posted by: MonKENy
And the public has spoken....ill withdraw my question like 10 secs before i posted it lol. Carry on boys and girls!

check out deviantart.com if you really want to post things like that.

 

[MrWizzard]

Originally posted by: MonKENy
And the public has spoken....ill withdraw my question like 10 secs before i posted it lol. Carry on boys and girls!

Lol

 

[Captante]

Originally posted by: MonKENy
no one cares so ill move on...Thanks for the uhhh...advice?

Free of charge!

 

[zerocool1]

Originally posted by: nakedfrog
Did that ATOT writer's collective ever take off? I got my invitation, but never joined because I'm a procrastinator, and, well, you know...

ok, so i wasn't the only one.

 

[pontifex]

wow, way to really change your tune, op.

 

[Canai]

Poems are not for pussies! WTF is wrong with you?

Be a man. Write a poem!

(no sarcasm, btw)

 

[hiromizu]

Poems are for people who have an alternate sense of reality.

 

[ShadowOfMyself]

Originally posted by: hiromizu
Poems are for people who have an alternate sense of reality.

:thumbsup:

:thumbsdown: for ATOT reaction to this topic

Cut the man crap already, being a poet doesnt make you any less "manly"

 

[MonKENy]

I was being sarcastic,,,but fine Since the thread wont die here you go


Riddles and games
your mind they will frame
and lock behind a closed door
they poke and they prod
you mumble and nod
not knowing you lost your way
its not your fault oh we all know that
but you sat on your ass
let the corrupt men get fat
hey what did you have to lose
how bout your soul
youve grown ugly and old
and theres a gaping hole
in whats left of your immortal remains
so kids, what have we learned?
if you sit on your butt
while the corporate slut
decides to take over your life
dont cry or complain
or beg to explain
because in the end we all burn

 

[MonKENy]

orrr how about

silence so loud lift the shroud that covers your eyes
muzzle flashes fire and you hear the cries
he pulls the sword from his belt
severs the five heads of the beast
burning into your soul leave the scars
fresh on your heart
love what once was
What will never be free to see
let it all lie
keep it close dont let it die
tears flow think as sacrificial goats blood in the river to flood the field
crimson in the setting sun
to be the end of all we know
everything as it once was
nothing to be as it ever seems


perhaps you prefer...

Before I met her I was mostly down
I traveled this world with only a frown
I was alone so was she
I needed her she needed me
We talked for awhile, When we did I found it easy to smile
Her heart is as golden as the sweetest necter of the bees
She is as beautiful as a sunset reflecting off the greatest of lakes on the last day of summer
Her hair runs in dark rivulets that seem taking from old mothers nights gown
Her eyes are sparks of stars on the clearest of nights
When she turns her piercing gaze unto me
a comet sails across my heart and my eyes cloud of visions of whats to be