At my expense

[etherealgrifter]

Putting together a computer sales site. Posted early version a while ago and it got ripped on, so I redesigned, but it's still pretty amateurish. I welcome all comments, constructive ones preferred.

http://www.roninpop.com/

Thanks.

 

[Slacker]

This will not end well...........

 

[MikeMike]

looks like a basic template website from like Frontpage, has no real flow to it, looks like it was designed for the mid 90's type of website.

Slacker has a good point too, most ppl dont take kindly to links to a site that could possibly make a n00b money

MIKE

 

[Mo0o]

-Bad font
-No pictures
-No logo
-Navigation not clear
-Purchasing setup confusing
-ugly colors

 

[minendo]

Websites that use horizontal scroll suck. Unless it is a large picture.

 

[ConwayJim]

yeah, it looks like it was done using a template from front page. Not to say that it's utterly horrible, it's not that bad, but i think you should look at some other types of software, to give the site a more professional look.

I'm sorry i'm not really in web design myself, but i know some people who are and i can ask them for some suggestions later...

I heard that the best method is to develp a good "site map" on paper first, this way you'll have a better sense of direction of where you want to go, rather then making up things as you go along.

 

[Slacker]

Originally posted by: nourdmrolNMT1
Slacker has a good point too, most ppl dont take kindly to links to a site that could possibly make a n00b money

MIKE

Its not that, I have seen many of these types of threads, the o.p. usually ends up getting pissed off at the comments and the whole thing bursts into flames :evil:

 

[AgaBoogaBoo]

Your site tries to educate the consumer too much, don't do that. List some models in a neat fashion, bullet points of target users, price, etc.

 

[etherealgrifter]

Yea I only post this on anandtech becuase I know no one here would ever buy from me. I take my advertising elsewhere.

made the whole thing from scratch, my own template and all, in netscape composer. Will definitely be getting better software eventually.

Will appreciate any help from your buds ConwayJim, thx.

 

[etherealgrifter]

Originally posted by: AgaBoogaBoo
Your site tries to educate the consumer too much, don't do that. List some models in a neat fashion, bullet points of target users, price, etc.

's a good point. Was hoping to attract people searching for comp advice thru google and such. Only an experiment for now.

 

[etherealgrifter]

Originally posted by: Slacker

Originally posted by: nourdmrolNMT1
Slacker has a good point too, most ppl dont take kindly to links to a site that could possibly make a n00b money

MIKE

Its not that, I have seen many of these types of threads, the o.p. usually ends up getting pissed off at the comments and the whole thing bursts into flames :evil:

hehehehe. my site RULZ. screw y'all

 

[revnja]

Why must the world be plagued with bad design such as this?

 

I wouldn't buy a pack of gum from that site, much less a computer.

 

[etherealgrifter]

Originally posted by: Slacker

Originally posted by: nourdmrolNMT1
Slacker has a good point too, most ppl dont take kindly to links to a site that could possibly make a n00b money

MIKE

Its not that, I have seen many of these types of threads, the o.p. usually ends up getting pissed off at the comments and the whole thing bursts into flames :evil:

Originally posted by: adambooth
Why must the world be plagued with bad design such as this?

Originally posted by: jumpr
I wouldn't buy a pack of gum from that site, much less a computer.

oooh hold me back, HOLD ME BACK!

 

[Colt45]

Colours arent the hottest
i dont like that side scroll bs

 

[TitanDiddly]

Have you PMed five users of the Judge icon for permission yet?

 

[KC5AV]

It may be the AT effect, but I literally read this entire thread waiting for you page to open, and I'm still waiting.

 

[Ryuson99]

Get a professional to make your page cause you suck at it.