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Anyone want to evaluate my essay? ESSAY POSTED

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DotheDamnTHing

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I have a essay due today and was wondering if anyone could take a look at it? Its on Propaganda and the Nazi regime. Its about 3 pages.


Pm me

Thanks

 
Sorry, I couldn't read the whole thing.... But:

"propaganda is not and end itself but a means to end"

Are you sure you got this quote right?
 
What did you do, write this in normal english then run it through a thesaurus and change all the words so that noone can comprehend wtf you are trying to say? My AP english teacher use to give people D's and C's for crap like this, sorry to be so blunt.
 
Originally posted by: DotheDamnTHing
whoa before you go around making accusations
(1) you dont know my syle of writing
(2) this is not high school work
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Yeah I do, and it sucks. My point is that writing is supposed to communicate, not show how many words you know. Are you writing for a phD or something?
 
Originally posted by: Kev
Originally posted by: DotheDamnTHing
whoa before you go around making accusations
(1) you dont know my syle of writing
(2) this is not high school work
Click to expand...

Yeah I do, and it sucks. My point is that writing is supposed to communicate, not show how many words you know. Are you writing for a phD or something?
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