anyone have some spare time? need a critic

[skim milk]

I'll just pm it to you.. copy and paste it to you

It's not very long, it's like two pages

 

[skim milk]

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Originally posted by: fritolays
I'll just pm it to you.. copy and paste it to you

It's not very long, it's like two pages

Why can't you just post it or post a link to the short story? If you did that, I think that you would have gotten more responses.

 

[hans030390]

um im only in high school. im in the honors classes though....but i wouldnt know if its good or not

send it to me if you still want a high schoolers opinion

 

[ifoundthetao]

I'll look over it for you.

 

[imported_Kensai]

I can't read.

 

[edro]

Originally posted by: Kensai
I can't read.

But you can type?