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Anyone have a minute to look over my resume?

M

MrDingleDangle

Lifer
Its been a while since i needed to send one out and just looking for some comments/suggestions


resume

of course the top line of personal information isnt exactly like that on the one i am going to send out
 
‎‎ Changed a program from C to JAVA and increasing its user interface
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‎‎ Changed a program from C to JAVA and increased its user interface
 
The first thing to do when writing a resume is check: Is your contact info current? You also need current and permanant contact info. Also, depending on the job you might want an Objective Statement. However, sometimes objective statements are not needed.
 
never mind the verb form, it's kind of meaningless to "increase a user interface"... try "improved", "made more intuitive", etc.
 
I would suggest that you add a lot more description to your work dutes, especially for your current position. You have plenty of room. One short sentence isn't enough. List strong accolades or goals that you've accomplished in your jobs, as well as routine duties. I would definitely include an objective statement that is tailored to the job you for which you are applying. If you had a strong GPA in either your masters or BS work, list it!
 
Look ok..... change that increased thing and i'd say go with the objective statement at the beginning " To secure a challenging and rewardign position in a successful adn progressive organization where my skills can be utilized and further developed" works good.. its nice and generic... poach it if you want!
 
Originally posted by: flamingelephant
Look ok..... change that increased thing and i'd say go with the objective statement at the beginning " To secure a challenging and rewardign position in a successful adn progressive organization where my skills can be utilized and further developed" works good.. its nice and generic... poach it if you want!
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thanks, changed it a bit to be-
To continue work within the Medical Field where I can apply and enhance my skills of Engineering and Computer Science

 
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