anybody with spare time?

[skim milk]

I made a thread about this yesterday.. but I made big changes.

It is due tonight.. so I'm hoping I can get some feedback. My classmates will be able to read it in class as it is shared so let me know with comments

Please pm me or post here, and whether you prefer to see it in .doc format or want me to copy and paste to your pm inbox

It is 3 pages

 

[thirtythree]

Single- or double-spaced? What's it about?

 

[skim milk]

single spaced

it is about friendship, the main character, college, job, interview, etc.

I had no clue what to write about... the fact that people are going to read it in class is somewhat intimidating so I would like to get some feedback.. otherwise, I really wouldn't care

 

[thirtythree]

I don't know how good I am with feedback, and I might have to leave momentarily, but you can send it to me. PM is fine.

 

[OREOSpeedwagon]

Send it to me if it's 500 words or less.. I need a creative writing story to turn in tomorrow morning 🙁

 

[skim milk]

anybody else want to read it and let me know what you think?

I'm going to be turning it in soon.. need one or two people to reach and critique

 

[delroy]

lol, peer review anandtech style

 

[thirtythree]

YGPM. Don't know if it'll be too helpful.