Any Spanish speakers here?

[aswedc]

I need help proof reading a short dialog I wrote for Spanish class, so if anyone here speaks Spanish I'd appreciate it if you read this over for grammatical and spelling mistakes. I know the accents aren't there, I don't know how to type them. And yes we're allowed to get help from non-students with our dialogs so I'm not cheating, for those of you that were thinking that. Don't know how many people here are Spanish speakers, but since I got a great responce for my Chemistry xtra credit challenge, I figued I'd give it a try...never hurts Thanks in advance.
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Speaker: In Spanish
What its supposed to say in English

Person 1: Hola
Hi

Person 2: Hola. Que Pasa?
Hey. Whats up?

2: Que hiciste semana pasada?
What did you do last weekend?

1: Pues?el viernes noche vi una pelicula
Well, on Friday night I saw a movie

1: Mi amigo dio un boleto y compri un refresco. El preceo fue dos dolares
My friend gave me a ticket and I bought a drink. The price was $2 dollars

2: Huy, tu refresco costo demasiado
Oh! That drink was too much.

1: Si, pero los boletos fueron barato.
Yes, but the tickets were cheap

1: Porque tuvimos un estudiante descuento. Y yu, que hiciste semana pasada?
Because we had student discount. And you, what did you do last weekend?

2: Fue a la comedia de mi hermana. Fue un el cuento de hadas, y fue cenicienta su el hada madrina ayudo ir a pueblo en contro a el principe.
I went to my sisters play. It was a fairy tale. She was Cinderella. Her fairy godmother helped her go to town to meet the prince.

1: Fue divertido?
Was it fun?

2: Si
Yes

1: Bueno
Good

2: Tuve que ir a clase
I have to go to class

2: Audios
Bye

1: Hasta Luego
See you later.

 

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1: Mi amigo dio un boleto y compri un refresco. El preceo fue dos dolares
My friend gave me a ticket and I bought a drink. The price was $2 dollars

- Where do you say he gave them to you, and not just anybody?

 

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Disclaimer: I took up to Spanish 4 in high school, but have forgotten a lot since then (junior in college now.



<< 2: Que hiciste semana pasada?
What did you do last weekend? >>

"Que hiciste la semana pasada" sounds more natural to me.



<< 1: Mi amigo dio un boleto y compri un refresco. El preceo fue dos dolares
My friend gave me a ticket and I bought a drink. The price was $2 dollars >>

Hmm, I don't think you're using the indirect object right here. I think it would be: "Mi amigo me dio un boleto y comp..."



<< 1: Porque tuvimos un estudiante descuento. Y yu, que hiciste semana pasada?
Because we had student discount. And you, what did you do last weekend? >>

Maybe it should be "descuento estudiante" instead? Not sure. Same thing for "la semana pasada" again.



<< 2: Fue a la comedia de mi hermana. Fue un el cuento de hadas, y fue cenicienta su el hada madrina ayudo ir a pueblo en contro a el principe.
I went to my sisters play. It was a fairy tale. She was Cinderella. Her fairy godmother helped her go to town to meet the prince. >>

Should be: "Fui a la ..", and "a el" contracts to "al".



<< 2: Tuve que ir a clase
I have to go to class >>

Should be: "Tengo que ir a clase"



<< 2: Audios
Bye >>

"Adios".

 

[trulfe]

No




thats spanish for no (translated for the non spanish speakers)