Yeah, your fraction is right. The only way to factor the top is with the quadratic formula, and you get
24y -+ (1416y^2)^(1/2)
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70
which becomes
12y -+ y * (354)^(1/2)
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35
BTW, something to the 1/2 power is the same as the square root, since there's no sqr. root symbol here...