Ad sucks? Yes or no

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Had to put together a magazine ad that promotes our six branches. Thought this might be a creative way to do it, shown as if the contractor had taken photo's of our branches and wrote their numbers on the polaroids. Tell me if it sucks!

edit: forgot to mention it's unfinished - need pictures of our other branches.

Contractor Ad

 

[minendo]

Nice layout.

 

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Originally posted by: minendo
Nice layout.

thanks

 

[Hammer]

looks really good. i like it.

 

[Kelvrick]

I likey.

 

[dOrKuS]

I like it

 

[Encryptic]

I'd hit- Wait, wrong window.

The ad looks good to me. :beer:

 

[WannaFly]

I like it but:

Why does it say "Johns ProPLumbing" at the top
and the word min-nesota is hard to read broken up like that. Also, why is there no contact information for Pipeline Supply?

 

[Jzero]

I think it's neat.

 

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Originally posted by: WannaFly
I like it but:

Why does it say "Johns ProPLumbing" at the top
and the word min-nesota is hard to read broken up like that. Also, why is there no contact information for Pipeline Supply?

John's ProPlumbing is a ficticious plumbing company. Yes, i agree sort of difficult to read Min-nesota when it's broken up. And yes there is contact information listed - 6 phone numbers incase you missed them.

 

[DamageInc]

Cool idea. I wish I could come up with things like that.