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A poem i wrote..

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LOLyourFace

Banned
in every waking moment
is an agnozing torment

the jealousy of your life
pains me greatly
like a bleeding flesh on knife
devouring me slowly

oh will you ever realize the pains I bear
for my heart cries out with burning tear

will this sufferring ever end, my love?
will you continue to hide from me, my god?

here I sit, with you plagueing my mind
thinking of the past, I wish I could rewind

because every waking moment
is an agnozing torment

(thanks for reading, back to the paper that's due tomorrow. I just had to let that out. now do discuss, nef, etc) PM me if you're curious of the inspiration.
 
that's the gayest gay to ever gay!

no seriously, i like it 🙂

Edit: I know it's not a happy poem, but I still like it...😛
 
Nice poem 🙂 I posted this a while ago and everyone thought I was a i love you too.

I don?t understand your self-destruction
I can?t stand to see your pain
I don?t understand how you can be so blind
when others are so vain
can?t you see you?re beautiful?
you?re everything to me
I?d hold you close forever
just to ease your suffering
I?d give my life and more for you
but you don?t want me to
its obvious there?s nothing
that you will let me do
I don?t know what?s going on
or what you?re going through
but one thing is for certain
I?ll never stop loving you

I'm not a poet either 😛 .. but it's kinda fun.
 
Originally posted by: Deslocke
Nice poem 🙂 I posted this a while ago and everyone thought I was a i love you too.

I don?t understand your self-destruction
I can?t stand to see your pain
I don?t understand how you can be so blind
when others are so vain
can?t you see you?re beautiful?
you?re everything to me
I?d hold you close forever
just to ease your suffering
I?d give my life and more for you
but you don?t want me to
its obvious there?s nothing
that you will let me do
I don?t know what?s going on
or what you?re going through
but one thing is for certain
I?ll never stop loving you

I'm not a poet either 😛 .. but it's kinda fun.
Click to expand...

mine is better because it rhymes 😛


 
Originally posted by: LOLyourFace
Originally posted by: Deslocke
Nice poem 🙂 I posted this a while ago and everyone thought I was a i love you too.

I don?t understand your self-destruction
I can?t stand to see your pain
I don?t understand how you can be so blind
when others are so vain
can?t you see you?re beautiful?
you?re everything to me
I?d hold you close forever
just to ease your suffering
I?d give my life and more for you
but you don?t want me to
its obvious there?s nothing
that you will let me do
I don?t know what?s going on
or what you?re going through
but one thing is for certain
I?ll never stop loving you

I'm not a poet either 😛 .. but it's kinda fun.
Click to expand...

mine is better because it rhymes 😛
Click to expand...

His rhymes too, every second and fourth line.
 
and since we're all sharing...

i yearn to sail
on the amber dreams of the night
to have its wings bear me away
from mundane humdrum

i wish i had more
of id's playful evening delight
to occupy my sanity
and stay overlong

i hear they're quite nice
preferable to a viper's bite
but then, what isn't?
some things, true

i do not have them
wondrous amber dreams of the night
i have no colour
all that's there is black
 
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