a poem I wrote during a realy rough spot in my life

[IronWing]

Could you write us a poam for Elenin? If you could work in pedobear and the credit downgrade that would be the best!

 

[dud]

just a poem i during some real difficult personel times i wrote
that time is over now but i think it might help some one? tell me what you think of it thanks enjoy



like a flower in a crack in the sidewark
do i cower in the dark
corner of my room

and like a lark on a lagoon in a park
i disembark
on a loneley juorney of life

and like an eelecrtrical spark
i arc
back and forth between pain & sorroow

and like a sand shark
i sit and lurk without remark
theres nothing left 2 say

-and like a treasure ship without a letter of marque
im an easy mark, for the pirates i call my friends
my life is one big question mark

-andlike tony stark
i just sit in a cave with a box of scraps trying to fix my broken heart

and like a charm quark
no body undrestands me

so i stand here and i
and i cover my heart in bark

I find it interesting who voted that they liked this "poem" and who did not ...

 

[Ichinisan]

I knew this thread was still going on, but I didn't think so many people were feeding the troll.

This is a lousy attempt at trolling because it's WAY TOO OBVIOUS. The trolling doesn't bother me at all, but the fact that it's so damn successful DOES bother me.

Trolling is an art. OP sucks at it. You guys are feeding him anyway. What's wrong with you gullible people?

 

[Soundmanred]

Still trollin'

 

[CRXican]

and like

your pome sucks

 

[brianmanahan]

I find it interesting who voted that they liked this "poem" and who did not ...

zinfamous voted no???? i can see schneiderguy of course, but zinfamous how could u?

 

[schneiderguy]

zinfamous voted no???? i can see schneiderguy of course, but zinfamous how could u?

 

[brianmanahan]

boomerd why did you link to my pome? http://forums.anandtech.com/showpost.php?p=32388837&postcount=38

 

[zinfamous]

zinfamous voted no???? i can see schneiderguy of course, but zinfamous how could u?

I honestly don't recall if I voted no or not. If I did, it was probably after the first read-through. On technical aspects alone, of course I voted no--but that was before I truly understood that which is brianmanahan.

I would vote "yes," today.

 

[William Gaatjes]

just a pome i during some real difficult personel times i wrote
that time is over now but i think it might help some one? tell me what you think of it thanks enjoy



like a flower in a crack in the sidewark
do i cower in the dark
corner of my room

and like a lark on a lagoon in a park
i disembark
on a loneley juorney of life

and like an eelecrtrical spark
i arc
back and forth between pain & sorroow

and like a sand shark
i sit and lurk without remark
theres nothing left 2 say

-and like a treasure ship without a letter of marque
im an easy mark, for the pirates i call my friends
my life is one big question mark

-andlike tony stark
i just sit in a cave with a box of scraps trying to fix my broken heart

and like a charm quark
no body undrestands me

so i stand here and i
and i cover my heart in bark

edit: changed "pome" to "poem" in the thread title, because it was annoying me in the way that someone scraping their fingers over a chalkboard would be annoying. -DrPizza

Dear lord, you have so much typing errors that even i feel uneasy about it.
And i am the

when it comes to typing errors.




EDIT:


Does somebody hear a dog barking ?

 

[brianmanahan]

I would vote "yes," today.

you burned my feelings, and i am warning you never to do what you did again

 

[brianmanahan]

Does somebody hear a dog barking ?

i have no idea what this means?

 

[eldorado99]

y did u stood to pee brain?

 

[BudAshes]

I voted yes

 

[brianmanahan]

I voted yes

thank you!

 

[schneiderguy]

reported

 

[BoomerD]

boomerd why did you link to my pome? http://forums.anandtech.com/showpost.php?p=32388837&postcount=38

Can't allow your stupidity to become forgotten...



(not that it's likely to happen...you keep reminding us constantly)

 

[ThatsABigOne]

This pome is phenomenal.

 

[Nebbers]

So where's the original thread this is a parody of?

 

[BoomerD]

This pome is fenominul.

FTFY to reflect the OP's spelling and intellect.:whiste:

 

[Nebbers]

Interesting how he spells more difficult words with no problem in all of his previous posts outside of this thread

 

[brianmanahan]

So where's the original thread this is a parody of?

i dont do that stupid parody crap, this is just thoughts from my life

 

[brianmanahan]

Interesting how he spells more difficult words with no problem in all of his previous posts outside of this thread

when im crying i find it harder to type

 

[Gibson486]

you had to bring this thread up again?

 

[Nebbers]

you had to bring this thread up again?

you had to bring this thread up again?