kevinthenerd
Platinum Member
I came up with a little tune. Tell me what you think of it.
Feel free to comment on the musicality of it, the structure, form, melody, etc.
Feel free to comment on the technology: the noise level, the clarity and accuracy of the instrumentation, etc.
Fell free to say what comes to mind. I'd rather see the real details of constructive criticism to make a better song rather than to have everybody say it's "ok." You either "LOVE" it or you can find flaws in it. I know it has flaws, but I can't put my finger on them.
Oh, you might want the link. hehe
http://www.gngsta.com/~kevin/mp3/happy.MP3
(That directory has open .htacess because all the stuff on there was either composed by me or recorded by me. The tracks that have a crappy piano sound were actually household recordings on my old 1968 upright.)
Feel free to comment on the musicality of it, the structure, form, melody, etc.
Feel free to comment on the technology: the noise level, the clarity and accuracy of the instrumentation, etc.
Fell free to say what comes to mind. I'd rather see the real details of constructive criticism to make a better song rather than to have everybody say it's "ok." You either "LOVE" it or you can find flaws in it. I know it has flaws, but I can't put my finger on them.
Oh, you might want the link. hehe
http://www.gngsta.com/~kevin/mp3/happy.MP3
(That directory has open .htacess because all the stuff on there was either composed by me or recorded by me. The tracks that have a crappy piano sound were actually household recordings on my old 1968 upright.)